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All Deviations
All Deviations


I look at you and see you hurting,
I know that you are in pain and I do nothing...
I just want to hold you close,
And take away your sorrow...

You are so sick,
And its like no one wants to help you.
Yet all I can do is watch,
I just want to kiss you and take away the pain...

I know that you are suffering inside...
And everyone just turns away.
But no more my love...
I lift you into the air...
"Let your sorrow fall from you body and away from your soul..."
"Let your sickness come into me..."
"Let me take your suffering, and give you my life."
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Another written a few months back. I wrote this one because I saw the pain He was in, emotionally, and I wanted so bad to just take it all away. I wanted to hold Him in my arms and take all His pain and hurt away...I want to give Him everything it takes to make Him happy. Enjoy
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~NINTheFragile:iconNINTheFragile: May 24, 2008, 8:45:56 PM
The ending lines of this really do add vivid visualization for the reader and get the reader emotionally involved I did rather enjoy this .... The one I connected with the most out of the new ones I had read today from you.. great work

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-