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All Deviations
All Deviations


With every breath I breath,
I feel your presence beating down upon me.
When I fall asleep,
I sleep and dream of you.

These dreams they are so vivid.
The things I wish I could do...
And yet I know these may never be true.
I'm still in love with you.

I whisper your name in my sleep...
Hoping to wake up with you in my arms.
I reach out into the darkness hoping you'll be there...
Again another dream of you.

When I cry in the night,
And when I feel alone...
Suddenly I feel your arms around my body.
I'm still in love with you.

I still feel your touch,
Even though you aren't there.
I still hear your breathing,
Even though you're nowhere near....I'm still in love with you...
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~XhappyXhappyXemoX:iconXhappyXhappyXemoX: Jun 11, 2008, 1:43:48 PM
its beautiful.

so heart felt.

=)

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il hold your hand if you hold mine
the time that we kill keeps us alive


chloe..x
~anime-fan-boi:iconanime-fan-boi: Jun 11, 2008, 8:55:11 PM
Thank you =)

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My focus... My Heart... My soul, All for you my Love
~NINTheFragile:iconNINTheFragile: Jun 11, 2008, 9:22:32 PM
Great wording... very beautiful imagery... great structure... wonderfully done.. nice work

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
~XhappyXhappyXemoX:iconXhappyXhappyXemoX: Jun 12, 2008, 12:11:45 PM
your welcome =)

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il hold your hand if you hold mine
the time that we kill keeps us alive


chloe..x